Choose It Narrative

1.One sunny day we went to a place called Rotorua to look around and see if we could live there. So we went on our air balloon and looked and looked.Then one morning we crashed in a place called a Maere and we were all screaming.‘help help’ and no one could hear us screaming so we had to work and work to get our air balloon fixed so we can get out of the Maere.It took us 3 years and 1 month to fix it and the man that was in the Maere said ‘you have to fix the Maere to’ and we all said ‘no not the Maere’ and the Maere took us 5 years and 3 month to do it.Because it was so big and large that we had to work all night and afternoon.Then we finished all the hard work..

       

2. After all these busy things we were heading back to Auckland and we were all happy and excited to go back to  Auckland.So when one of my friend called Jane was  going to put on the fire. Then she put on the fire and she got  burned on her hand and she was scearming ‘eeeeeeeewwwwwcccchhh’ and then we had rush to the hospital and get her hand check . After that she got her hand and it was not good one of her bones cracked.So she had to stay at the hospital for 4 weeks and 1 day. When she had to stay there she was so sacred that someone was coming to her and she was secarming eeeeeeee wwwwwwww and it was just the doctor that was coming to do a surgery on her hand and when they looked at her hand they was a beg that was staying in her hand so that’s why she got her hand burned. So the next morning we were getting ready to get Jane from the hospital. So we got in our car and went to the hospital. When we were there and we got inside and they said who are you looking for and aunty Timmy said my daughter Jane.So the lady said she is in room 4 upstairs and aunty Timmy said thank you. So me my Dad and my Mum and aunty Timmy and her husband and her other daughter and her two son’s went upstairs in room 4 and Jane was not there and they had took her home by themselves.So we went home and Jane was outside crying because they have left her outside.So we got Jane inside and she said it is bad news and good news and we said bad news first and she said there is a beg in my hand and then we said now good news and she said i don’t have to go to the hospital any more.So we got all of our staff and went back to Auckland and it was good to be back and the bad news was someone had took our house to live in but we could buy another house.

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Athletics Race

This Morning on a sunny sunny day we went outside to did some athletics. Athletics is so fun and caned of funny and there is some photo's and 1 video of us playing.

On a sunny sunny day the Pav and Mr Moran and Mrs Moala  lined up and was ready to go down to the concrete to rock and roll  for athletics but before that we had to sneak through all the classes to go on concrete to sit down.  After that the girl’s and I had to stand up in a line and get ready to run for Mr Moran to clapped the run starter. I was so scared that I had  butterflies in my stomach. Next me and the girl’s had to stand up to Mrs Moala and see who was the top 4. After Mrs Moala picked the top 4 it was the other girl’s team to stand up in a line and  and sprint to Mrs Moala . Mrs Moala had to pick the top 4 girls again and then it was the boys team  they had to stand up in a line and wait for Mr Moran to clap the run starter. After Mr Moran clapped  the run starter they sprinted so fast but Mrs Moala had to pick the top 4 boy’s. At last after all that race it was the final’s and the girl’s and boys had to do the crab walk  and Mr Moran tricked them from doing a crab walk from sprinting and Mr Moran was in to. So Mr Moran gave the run starter to Francis to clap it and they all did it.  They were all struggling how to do it and they did not give up and  in 1st place it was Mr Moran our teacher and in 2st place it was John and in 3st place it was Sifa and in 4st place it was Maddi and after that  funny crab walk with them struggling and with our teacher playing to we had to line up in a straight line and head back to class and had to still sneak in a straight line and back to class to get some hard work done.

MUSIC MADNESS

This is my writing about music.Cause now Pt England's Topic for this term is MUSIC MADNESS and there is some video's and photo's of our teacher's being silly.                                                                     One sunny day after all the beautiful holidays we were going to the assembly.  The pav and all the school walked with their two strong feet and headed to the assembly.  After that we got to the hall and there were special people that was singing a beautiful song to us.Then after all that beautiful song that they sing to us we said a pray so god can bless us.  After that blessed prayer we had some video’s of our silly teachers.We had team 1’s video they were singing songs and playing card’s.Soon it was going to be team 2’s band.Then we had team 2’s band with Mrs Gaston singing in the start. Then we had team 3’s video the pav and the other teachers like Miss Davis and Miss Eadie and Miss King.The pav and all the other teachers were doing a movie about .The best teacher in team 3 is Miss King. Next it was team 4’s video they were the only one  that was so so silly that they made Mr J go silly two.Finally and not least we had team 5’s video they were the only one that was having a movie. A great movie. It was about the mighty lion king that was brave to stand up to his family and all his family bell down to he.After all that silly video’s the year 1’s stood up and headed to their classes and another band came out and it was the same people like Mrs Nua Mr Jacobson and Mr Wiseman and Mr S and Mr Burt.After we went outside of the hall and into our classroom’s to get some work done and now it is all about music.Now our topic is MUSICAL MADNESS FOR THIS TERM.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            THANK YOU FOR READING MY WRITING

My Own Rocket Ship

My rocket ship look’s like a green alien rocket ship and it has a window. It has a ready jet go sticker that will support me. My rocket ship is special because when you press the pink button it will give you lots of food.Then when you press the green button it will give you a pool that is a hot pool.When the aliens come and get me from my rocket ship the fire bom will come out and destroy the aliens and the aliens will disappear from me my rocket ship. 

Outside I am going to space so when I stand there a magic button will come up and then when you press the blue button a colourful elevator will come out and my rocket ship will open it for me. After that the stairs will come out.Then I can go in my rocket ship.When I am ready to sit down I said good bye then I sat down on my chair. Then I put my seat belt on and then I was ready to blast off to space. My rocket was counting 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1.  Then my rocket ship slowly blast off to space and all the engines and the smoke was coming out of my rocket ship then I looked outside and there was fire that I can see when the engines and the smoke was coming at from my rocket ship.

Then I went in my rocket ship and then I was there and then I flew up in space and I saw lot of planet and comet.The planet I went to look in was Venus 1st and Neptune 2nd and Uranus 3rd and Mars 4th and that is all that planet I saw in space.  It was so amazing.  Venus was so hot that I almost fell to the ground and it was like 7000 degrees.  Then I flew all the way to Mars.  Mars was so amazing and when I stood on mars there was no oxygen or anything but there was something the same like earth had. Mars had the same thing as earth. Mars has volcanoes and mountains and the name of the mountain of mars is olympus mons.  That is the thing that mars had that earth had.  I saw lots of things like the sun and the moon and when I stood on the moon it was so amazing to stand on it.  When I first went up in space I had butterflies in my tummy and I could not stop that butterfly trouble in my tummy.It was so awesome and it was my first time going in space to see lots of planets and all the comet I wish I could go back in space again.

My Cross Country

On Friday the 1st of September we had cross country.  As Mrs Nua walked over to where we were sitting I was scared and I had butterflies in my tummy.  When we were at the start line I was so scared and frustrated because I had to wait. I could not get all that feeling’s out of me.  That cross country was so scary and scared and frustrated.

stardome trip

My writing I was doing about the star dome trip that we were blessed to go. It was amazing awesome and cool cause Mrs lai got her baby son and I got to hold he. He is so cute.We got to play on the park when we finish watching a movie on the roof and that was the first time I have watched a movie on the roof.The park was so fun and there was a flying fox and I chew chew chew train and a swing and it was all fun cause of all the parent that come to help us. Thank you to the teacher's that was Miss Moran and Miss king and Miss Davis Miss Eadie and Mr H and Mr Moran my teacher and Miss Moran my girl teacher and thank you to all you guys my team 3 teacher's. This is a thank you to all you guys. This is it a key to growing as a teacher is to keep company mainly with teacher's who uplift you, whose presence inspire you whose dedication drives you, and that is it for all of the teacher's that did this for us, and this is for the parent's that came,and this is it I would like to thank you for making this year a very special one for the student's in my class room and also for me. You have been an invaluable member of our class and your time and talents contribute to providing a successful year of learning for each student,and thank you to all of you guys,and this is for Mr h for being the best teacher,and it goes like this your're the heart of every class room the soul of every school,The mind behind the message,That learning is cool,Your patience and understanding cannot be undersold,Your courage and commitment is that of legends told,each day you teach our children is a day to rejoice because of you our children will have their own voice, So thank you dear teacher for passing knowledge though the years,You thought you were going to be a bad teacher but you are not to me you are so amazing and awesome and  thank you for everything you have did for me Mr h the best teacher I had and thank you for that trip that we went to and thank you for making smile when I am sad or angry so thank you so much Mr H.Love you and we will miss you when you go. Thank you to Mr Moran and Miss Moran for doing everything for me. we all love you and god bless you Mr H and I love you so much and take care of yourself  

Yesterday, all the Year 3s and Year 4s got on a bus to go to the Stardome. Yesterday we went on the bus and got at stardome. When we got there was lots of cars parking.As we were there we got to put our bag in a big cage.Then we went in the stardome and got to look in it and there was lots of objects that were there but it was in glass so there was button's you have to push and it was so amazing. There was a rocket one that if you push it down it will come up.

At the Stardome, we learned some really cool things about our solar system.What we learn was that venus was the hottest planet that is in our solar system.We learn why venus was the hottest planet because at night venus is still hot then mercury but mercury at night it is cold than venus and the gas of venus is hot and that is why venus is the hottest planet in our solar system. The star is hot and the star is the sun.

When we weren’t in the Stardome, we were having fun outside. After we watched the movie on the roof we went outside and played some games and did some activity outside that was tough and playing on the flying fox and the chew chew chew train and on the spinner wheel and the swing on the swing. That is all the activity that we all did.

After all this, we headed back to Point England School. When we finish stardome we come on the bus back and headed back to school and it was still lunch time and we went outside the hall at school and played some hand ball and some of us was so tired because of the trip that we went on. We loved stardome and my favorite part of stardome was watching the movie on the roof and playing outside of stardome and singing songs when we were headed over to stardome.

The phases of the moon

This is my writing that I did next to sivaenah. It was a dictation about the phases of the moon.it was so easy and it had miss kings beautiful voice that was in it she had to do it for team 3. She is so amazing and awesome at doing it for us. She is so amazing and awesome at doing it for us. Thank you to miss king for doing it for us. Love you miss king. 

The amount of the moon you can see from earth depends on how much of it has light up by the sun. This amount changes each day. The phases of the moon depends on it position in relation to the sun in earth. As the moon makes it way around the earth we see the bright parts of the moon surface at different angles does are called phases of the moon it takes 29 days for the moon to orbit the earth.

Season dictation

Season are caused because of the earth changes position with the sun. The earth travels around the sun and then orbit once a year as the earth orbit the sun and the amount of the sunlight each place on the planet get’s every day changes slightly. This change causes the season. We divide the year into four season spring summer autumn and winter. Each season least three months with summer being the warmest season,winter being the coldest and spring and autumn lying in between the season lot of impact on what happens on the earth.

Story about my family's pets

Here is our beautiful pets Job Joseph and Allay my one is the black one the other kitten it my sister one the black and white one and the do Allay is my brothers dog she is only 11 month years old and the two of the kittens are 1 years old. Bless you my good pets. Wish you all the best. I love you.

Duffy Books

Today I was very lucky and blessed to get my own Duffy Book.Thanks heaps Duffy