Thursday, 24 May 2018
Choose It Narrative
Today you will be writing a narrative. In order to help you get started, we selected some pictures for you to use in your writing. You must use ONE picture.
When you have decided which picture you want to use, delete the other 3 and enlarge the picture you have chosen.
Don’t forget! A narrative needs to have a beginning, middle and an end. It also needs to have a problem (conflict) that is solved (resolved) by the end of the story.
Bristol Balloon Fiesta 2009, By mattbuck (category) [CC BY-SA 2.0 (https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.0) or CC BY-SA 3.0 (https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0)], from Wikimedia Commons
By Rapportere [CC0 Public Domain (https://creativecommons.org/publicdomain/zero/1.0/)], via pxhere.
Jetlev Jetpack, By Seg9585 [CC BY 3.0 (https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/3.0)], via Wikimedia Commons
Aircraft, by WikiImages [CC0 Public Domain (https://creativecommons.org/publicdomain/zero/1.0/deed.en)], via pixabay.
Begin Writing Here:Once upon a time, there was a boy name Simon he was so excited to go on his bird to fly up and see around New zealand.When he was surfing on his bird he could see, people and they looked like little ants walking around.As he was going up and up he was shaking so hard but he had to get off his fear. So he closed his eyes and prayed to God and he said please god help me to get off my fear and to help me to surf so next time i can do this and as we say this in Jesus name amen.Then he was happy again and he started to go around New zealand.He went to Rotorua and Hasting and all these other places.Then when he come back from Rotorua and that and then he fall and broke his neck and leg.
TO BE CONTINUE
Wednesday, 23 May 2018
Monday, 21 May 2018
On a sunny day Mrs Moala and Miss West wanted to do a experiment and they did it.Then i thought that the pretty ball that Mrs Moala had will broke and and Miss West is ball willbounce.Then they thought about whose ball is going to bounce up.So they started they ball experiment and then they bounce it together and Mrs Moala ball cracked and Miss West ball bounce high and then they had to clean it up.If i had a small ball i will drop it and it will fall first because it is small and pretty.But if i had a big ball it will fall last and slower but the small ball will fall faster.First my teachers had to find out which ball is going to fall down first. The big ball is going to fall first because it is heavy.Mrs Moala said her one was going to fall first because it is small and Miss West said her one is going to fall so they did a experiment to see which ball is going to fall down first.But before they were going to do the experiment they had to get same chairs to see which one is going to fall.So Mrs Moala and Miss West had to drop the ball at the same time.One of the ball is going to bounce and one of the ball is not going to bounce.The pretty ball is going to crack and one ball is going to bounce high.The air was pushing the ball down so it can bounce.One ball is bigger and one ball is smaller than the other.That one is going to crack and the other ball is going to bounce than they got same other ball and they did they experiment and both of the ball bounce up and down.
Thursday, 17 May 2018
This is my experiment that i did with Jerry and Nature and myself and it was cool for us because we got to explore about bridge's and it was amazing to do it with them and a big THANK YOU TO NATURE AND JERRY for helping me THANK YOU AGAIN.
Wednesday, 16 May 2018
Monday, 14 May 2018
Friday, 11 May 2018
Monday, 7 May 2018
And it was yummy.Then when it was 6 clock we had to go to our changing room to perform.Then we had to practiced some of our dance so we do not get nervous.Then they called us to go and sit down and once we were sitting down outside we saw the sky and it was getting darker and darker.
Then the performs started and they said let us pray then we prayed and then they said please rock come then the rock band went up and the were singing and they one was about a driving donkey and it was cool and funny
Then after them was the samoan junior group they had a siva samoa and the boys haka and our older boys went with them to do the haka with them and it was cool and cute for the little kids like Mrs Moala son.
Then they finish and then it went on and on.
It take for long for us seniors to wait until it was our turn.Then finally it was the cook island group and then it was the Tongan boys they were so amazing it was cool but we could not sit down and watch we had to go to the back and wait until it was our group the samoan group then they finished and one of the tongan boys stayed and they were dancing and it was funny and then one of the tongan boy stayed and went at the back of the line and then when the other boys went of he started dancing crazy and it was funny
Then it was our group the samoan group we had a siva samoa and it was cool and we used dj twitch song and it was a samoan song and it was cool then of our siva samoa our boys did a haka and it was cool and then they finished and then we had to change and go home and then they said good night and have a good night then went to change and we went home.
Immersion Assembly Recount
WALT: recount a personal experience using correct sentence punctuation and sentences which make sense to the reader.
PLANNING: You now have 5 minutes to add the keywords to your plan. Do not write any sentences in the boxes below.
Orientation (Introduction): How will you hook the reader?
Who?Team 1 Team 2 Team 3 Team 4 and Team 5.
What?They had some activity to do.
Where?In the hall.
When?Today on monday The 30 of April.
BODY: Describe what happened.
Paragraph 2 (3-4 sentences)
School Theme for Term 2:
Team 1:they had to ture and push the rock so they can go.
Team 2:they were bring there bikes to school.
Team 3 :there were dancing on the park and the bridge.
Team 5:They did a tug of war against each other.
How did each of these teams share their inquiry topic?with a movie each
Paragraph 3 (3-4 sentences)
Team 4 Inquiry Topic:
How did the Team 4 teachers share this? They were trying to see what can fly.
Paragraph 4 (3-4 sentences)
Write about your favourite item from assembly. My favourite one was team 4 they tried to fly the plane but it flipped over.
What do you want to/hope to learn about?how to fly a plane
What do you think about the new term theme overall?it was amazing
Is this different to how you felt before the assembly?yes
Now that you have made a plan, it is time to write your recount in full sentences:
I know I have been successful writing because my recount:
Has an orientation to tell who, what, when, where.
Recounts the experience in paragraphs in the order the events happened.
Shares my feelings about the experience at the end.
Is written using verbs in the past tense (I saw, I walked, I felt).
Has sentences with capital letters and full stops.
- Get feedback from a buddy.
- Create a drawing/image or add a photo.
- Share your writing and image on your blog:
Labels: 2018, Writing, Recount, Immersion Assembly, I like to move It, Ako3
- Add the link to your blog to our class Blog Log.
On monday the first day of term 2 all of pt england school went to the hall to see what was our topic for this term and it was i like to move it.So first was team 1 They went for a trip to the beach but a car was blocking them so they tired pushing it but they could not push it away so they thought of some idea but they could think of superwoman trying to push the rock.So one of them thought of getting a big stick and jumping on it and then it worked.
Then it was team 2 turn they were racing around and were bring they bike’s to school but they were not allowed to bring their bike to school.There were distring this lady.Then the lady come to them and go away Mr jackson these not want you to see his bike broken so they went away then they come back with a trolley and they were skating all around the stage then the lady come again and said go away then they went away.After that they come back again with bike skateboard and all does other stuff then they went on it and one of the teacher’s almost fall of her skateboard then they were talking about they actity and then it was done.
Then it was team 3 turn and it was so funny and fun they got to go to other places and dance like the park the bridge and all the other places.They were dancing to the Lazy Siren jam and it was cool .They were dancing on the wood and it looked scarer to dance on it because you will fall of and then they were running around and dancing like crazy people.but they dance were cool.
After it was our team.Team 4 .We saw then trying to do a plan to build it and then they got a plan then Mr Goodwin was like team 4 on three one two three but no one did it but Mr Goodwin so they went off and built it and it was cool.it was cool they showed us a little video about people creating stuff and flying of it and and go with there object’s and it was funny and fun to watch.Some of them fall and hurt themself.So we tried it and it flipped over it was so bad.
After team 4 it was team 5 they did a tug of war and it was cool they got to verse the sis sis faces and it was so funny. Then they did the tag of war and it was cool and the sis sis faces won then they had to wear gloves and the other group were wearing garden gloves and the other group were wearing plastic gloves and then the did the tag of war and the other group won and then sis sis faces and some changer they wanted to put dishwashing on their gloves and then they did the tag of war and the other group won and then it was done and then we had to go back to class to start off the day.