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Showing posts with label Writing2017. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing2017. Show all posts

Monday, 30 October 2017

what's the time Mr wolf

My writing about a game called what's the time Mr wolf.So the pav and Mr Moran and Mrs Moala went outside to play what's the time Mr wolf.It was so fun.


One sunny day the pav and Mrs Moala and Mr Moran went outside to play a game and it is called what’s the time Mr wolf it was so fun that we got to play it.So we stand up and lined up in two straight lines it was the boy’s line and the girl’s line.After that we tippy toed to the bottom grass and played there.Mr Moran was the bad wolf and Sivaenah had to say what’s the time Mr wolf and we had to creep quietly he said with his big mouth 3:00 and he looked around to see who was moving and some of us went back like me Maddi Jane Nina Jerry Ozzy and Sione and all these other people and some of us was so close to getting the bad wolf’s back but he turned around and he looked back and saw that person in front of him was moving and it was central so Mr Moran said to her to go to the back because she moved.  So Sivaenah said it again what’s the time Mr Wolf and he said 5:00 and he looked again to see who was moving and it was some other people that was moving so I was so close to getting the bad wolf and then Sivaenah said it again and she said what’s the time Mr Wolf and he said with his strong mouth 7:00 and Jane and Oalii got him and when Oalii and Jane got them Sivaenah said it again and he said dinner time and he eat some of us but not for real’s.

Friday, 15 September 2017

What If Planet

15 Sep 2017 10:40:53.jpg  This is my writing that we have to do and it is called what if planet and my planet is the colourful planet in our solar system.It is called the it is called the colourful slimy planet.It has light pin k and dark blue and all that other colour's and it has lighting power's that can kill people.

My planet look’s like a rainbow planet that goes around and around. It has all of the colour’s that is in the rainbow.  It has blue light pink dark blue and light green and all the other colour’s.It is circle and colourful.It has colourful tree’s and grass.It is sparkly and spiky.It has so much colour’s. It is called the colourful slimy planet.It is the only colourful planet in our solar system.It is right next to Jupiter the biggest planet in our solar system.It has big bright star’s and a sun next to the bright star and it has big white shooting stars that shoot all the time.As I was walking up the slippery stairs I could not walk up it then I got up like about 7Minutes . As I was walking I could see snowy twinkling stormy slime coming up from the roof.That stormy slime was frozen and cold. My planet look’s like Saturn cause Saturn has different colours and it has a sign that say’s Samoan girl’s planet.It is the only colourful planet.It has lighting power's that can kill people.          
TO BE CONTINUE




Wednesday, 16 August 2017