Animation Voice Over.
Hi My name is Zoe and this is my animation about cave art.Long long ago there was a dog in the middle of no where.So some hunting people come and wanted to eat so they saw a dog and got there stuff out and then they raced to the dog and then the dog ran away because he was scared then the dog ran to the forest and then he was crying and then the hunting people heard him and turned back and then the dog ran to the beach and they were trying to get him but he was to fasted but the where surrounding him and then he got stuck in the middle and then one of the hunting people throw the sword and then the dog died then they went home and walked and walked then they put on the oven and cooked him. 10 minutes later the meat was cooked and then they took the meat to the king and the king eat it and he said mhhhh. Thanks for watching hope you enjoy.
Hello Zoe. Your piece of writing is great but there are some mistake that you need to re-read. you explain that the story came with a video but I don't see a video. I believe you will need to go back and see if you could get some help.
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