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Thursday 10 March 2016

The spooky forest

In the forest there are spooky big wet footprints.  The people are invisible and a blue mysterious shadow shine on the trees. There are freaky invisible ghosts in the spooky forest. There are bending branches with a green enormous monster. 





3 comments:

  1. Hi Zoe it's Amelia I really liked how you used some adjectives carry on don't stop.Try your best.

    by Amelia Feleti

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  2. Hi Zoe it's Amelia I really liked how you used some adjectives carry on don't stop.Try your best.

    by Amelia Feleti

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  3. Hi Zoe, I loved your story about the spooky forest, and all the amazing word you learnt. I loved your writing and mostly your picture. Where do you get all your words from? It's amazing.

    From Lotu

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