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Send these animals off on an adventure together. Where are they going? How are they going to get there? How will they know where to go?
Write to narrate (tell) a story about this adventure.
What problem is caused?
How is it solved?
Think about:
where your story is set
who your characters are – what they do, what they say, and how they think and feel
the problem and how it is solved
the order of your ideas and how they are linked.
Remember to:
choose your words carefully
take care with your spelling, punctuation, and sentences
edit – add or delete words or sentences to improve your work.
Planning Space They come by one by one
They were all drinking it they were happy when they drink it.
Start Writing Here:
On a sunny day some animals and insects went to this farm that had a bucket right in the middle of the farm. So first some bees went to drink it and some of it look like they were dying in the water and some of them look like they were drinking.Moving on then the bird come and drink and once he was drinking he told his wife to come and drink and so his wife come to drink with him and they eat they die bees that were in it and then some of the other bees run away. Then a single rabbit came all along by himself and he was drinking and drinking and it was so yummy and nice to drink. Then a roster and his wife came along and drink for a minute and went back home and then it started to rain and then it was the donkey. He was so big his nose could not fit but there was a little hole for his nose to fit and then it was the big bull he was tired of eating so he went to drink some water and when he went to drink the water his nose was had grass and muddy and puddy . Then they all went home to have some rested for another great day.But they could not sleep because the donkey family were running around and then all the animals came outside and then they had a fight but no one was there to stop it then they fighted and fighted.Then the bees were stinging they and then all the animals went to fight the bees and then the man that own them come back for england and said get back in your house and then they all went in there house and never ever come back to drink the water. But only the man went to drink it and then when he went to drink it, he died because it had poison in it and he died real bad then the animals got the phone and called 111 and said we went the ambulance because our owner had died.Then they went to see if he can still be alive but they said sorry he his died then they went to his funeral and they were crying so hard then they all went back home sad.
THE END.
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