Lisa carrington woke up in a beautiful hotel. She was so so happy because she was going to row in the Olympics race. Lisa went and ate breakfast so she can be more and more excited about the challenging race at the Rio Olympics. Lisa got dressed up in her Olympics t-shirt and put her fast shoes and called a taxi. She went in it and went to the Rio 2016 Olympics rowing race.
When Lisa went in the stadium she got lost. Then she told the officer if they know where it is so she went with the officier man and she got there. When she got there she saw that her boat was missing and she was so upset because her boat was missing. Then she went inside the officers next to the steps and she said to them where is my coach and they said he is sick in the hospital so she called a taxi and went to see him and she went inside the hospital and she saw him. So the coach got more and more better and Lisa and her coach went to the race. Lisa went up to the line and her coach was proud of her. So Lisa went up the state and got her gold medal and went home with it and before she was going home she went and huddle her coach and then she went home in a taxi.
Then she find her coach and then they went to the race. She won her game and she got her gold medal and her big prize. It was a big ring square. She take photos with her coach and her family. It was amazing and awesome and then she put it on facebook. Her coach put on comments and put a photo that was with her and her coach it was amazing and awesome and fantastic because it was cool.
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