Once upon a time there was a muddy muddy shack in the middle of my house. I had a pet and it was a kitten and he went to the shack and he got all muddy and he came back and he was all muddy. When we went outside it was raining and the the shack full down. When we went outside the shack all fall down and the was all muddy and it was all broken. There was bees and fly and it was flying all around the muddy muddy shack. Then when I went outside my legs was all muddy.
Bees and fly were hungry and that's why they were busy flying looking for a food outside why don't you feed them. However Zoe you are doing great and trying your best to write an interesting story. Which is good to continue making more stories to develop more of your thinking skill. By Hope
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