Show Not Tell
Tell sentence: It was a cold and rainy day.
Show sentence: It was raining and the wind was blowing my face,making it cold. People were shirving next to me and raping there self with there scaf. People ran well, the wind was blowing them back.
Tell sentence: I went to the beach.
Show sentence: When I went to the beach there was a bright sun and clear water that people were swimming in. There were lots of palm trees and lots of people walking around enjoying the beach.
Tell sentence: Carol bought new shoes because hers broke.
Show sentence: Coral was sad because she broke her shoes. But she went shopping and bought some new shoes. She was so happy when she got her new shoes so she tried it on and it perfectly fit her.
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