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Thursday 24 May 2018

Choose It Narrative



Choose It Narrative





Today you will be writing a narrative. In order to help you get started, we selected some pictures for you to use in your writing. You must use ONE picture.





When you have decided which picture you want to use, delete the other 3 and enlarge the picture you have chosen.





Don’t forget! A narrative needs to have a beginning, middle and an end. It also needs to have a problem (conflict) that is solved (resolved) by the end of the story.









Image Attributions:


Bristol Balloon Fiesta 2009, By mattbuck (category) [CC BY-SA 2.0 (https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.0) or CC BY-SA 3.0 (https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0)], from Wikimedia Commons


By Rapportere [CC0 Public Domain (https://creativecommons.org/publicdomain/zero/1.0/)], via pxhere.


Jetlev Jetpack, By Seg9585 [CC BY 3.0 (https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/3.0)], via Wikimedia Commons


Aircraft, by WikiImages [CC0 Public Domain (https://creativecommons.org/publicdomain/zero/1.0/deed.en)], via pixabay.












Begin Writing Here:Once upon a time, there was a boy name Simon he was so excited to go on his bird to fly up and see around New Zealand he was surfing on his bird he could see, people and they looked like little ants walking around.As he was going up and up he was shaking so hard but he had to get off his fear. So he closed his eyes and prayed to God and he said please god help me to get off my fear and to help me to surf so next time i can do this and as we say this in Jesus name amen.Then he was happy again and he started to go around New Zealand went to Rotorua and Hasting and all these other places.Then when he come back from Rotorua and that he fall and broke his neck and leg.





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Part 2 After when he fall down and broke his leg he went to the hospital and got a xray for his leg and arm .When he said how is my leg and arm.The doctor said your leg and arm is not OK we have to take you to room 1 to rest and have some food.Then he went to room 1 and he meet a boy name Alex, and Alex explain to him why he was in the hospital and he said I had to cut my leg off because there was something in it and it was bad.Then Simon felt sorry because he had never ever meet a person with a leg cut off.Then the doctor came and said Alex you are good to go and have a xray and Simon said no no i don't won't Alex to leave with out me and the doctor said sorry but we have to take he.Then Alex said please just stay i will be back for you OK Simon and,Simon said OK Alex i will stay for you.When it was getting dark and dark he was getting scared but he had to stay brave then the doctor turn all the light off and when the doctor's turn off the light Simon got scared and he saw a shadow walking a long the stair and he got scared and he did not know who was it.Then he went under his blanket and it was..................
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Part 3 is coming up.

1 comment:

  1. Hey Zoe!
    My name is VJ, I really like your story! I liked how he flew around to places and how you said the people looked like tiny ants walking around. I was wondering how large was the bird? Or what kind of bird it was? Anyways blog you later! If you would like to visit my blog here is the link: http://odsverrah-jinsut.blogspot.co.nz/

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