Choose It Narrative

1.One sunny day we went to a place called Rotorua to look around and see if we could live there. So we went on our air balloon and looked and looked.Then one morning we crashed in a place called a Maere and we were all screaming.‘help help’ and no one could hear us screaming so we had to work and work to get our air balloon fixed so we can get out of the Maere.It took us 3 years and 1 month to fix it and the man that was in the Maere said ‘you have to fix the Maere to’ and we all said ‘no not the Maere’ and the Maere took us 5 years and 3 month to do it.Because it was so big and large that we had to work all night and afternoon.Then we finished all the hard work..

       

2. After all these busy things we were heading back to Auckland and we were all happy and excited to go back to  Auckland.So when one of my friend called Jane was  going to put on the fire. Then she put on the fire and she got  burned on her hand and she was scearming ‘eeeeeeeewwwwwcccchhh’ and then we had rush to the hospital and get her hand check . After that she got her hand and it was not good one of her bones cracked.So she had to stay at the hospital for 4 weeks and 1 day. When she had to stay there she was so sacred that someone was coming to her and she was secarming eeeeeeee wwwwwwww and it was just the doctor that was coming to do a surgery on her hand and when they looked at her hand they was a beg that was staying in her hand so that’s why she got her hand burned. So the next morning we were getting ready to get Jane from the hospital. So we got in our car and went to the hospital. When we were there and we got inside and they said who are you looking for and aunty Timmy said my daughter Jane.So the lady said she is in room 4 upstairs and aunty Timmy said thank you. So me my Dad and my Mum and aunty Timmy and her husband and her other daughter and her two son’s went upstairs in room 4 and Jane was not there and they had took her home by themselves.So we went home and Jane was outside crying because they have left her outside.So we got Jane inside and she said it is bad news and good news and we said bad news first and she said there is a beg in my hand and then we said now good news and she said i don’t have to go to the hospital any more.So we got all of our staff and went back to Auckland and it was good to be back and the bad news was someone had took our house to live in but we could buy another house.

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