I am a Year 8 learner at Pt England School in Auckland, New Zealand. I am in Room 3 and my teacher is Mrs Tele'a.
Monday, 3 July 2017
water dictation
Looking out at the clean glistening blue water. I see a walkway. Suddenly I stop. I think to myself. Would this be a good idea before giving myself a chance to answer. I find myself jumping onto the slippery log. I skip from log to log. Splash slipping off the log. I land head first into the ice cold water. With all my strength i swim across the water back to the beach. What an adventure.
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hi zoe i like how you rout in the first of your sentins looking out at the clean glistening blue water and also like the rest
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