Up on the bright lit stage the Samoa princess was beautiful and they dance beautiful and great. Before the performance the Samoa team dress up and then went on the stage and then we dance and all the big Samoa team cheer for us. Under the bright lights on the stage we were wearing a white t-shirt and a red spikey necklace and a lava lava and we had lipstick on our face.
Well done Zoe. I really like how you have started your sentences with different words and used full stops and capital letters. You need to think about using was and were. If you are talking about something that has already happened, you need to use "were". Listen to audio
ReplyDeleteGreat Job Zoe you are doing great. You need to make sure to use "were" on your writing because it was in the past. Keep going Zoe and keep finishing things of properly. By Revival
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