Riley was going for a long walk down the rock pools to go and find a great house to live in. Riley saw a sparkling shell and she went in her sparkling shell. She loved it so she lived in her sparkling shell.
Excellent job on your story and illustration Zoe. You have your capital letters and full stops in the right place too. Next time think about using different words to describe things - what could you have used instead of using sparkly twice?
Excellent job on your story and illustration Zoe. You have your capital letters and full stops in the right place too. Next time think about using different words to describe things - what could you have used instead of using sparkly twice?
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