what's the time Mr wolf

My writing about a game called what's the time Mr wolf.So the pav and Mr Moran and Mrs Moala went outside to play what's the time Mr wolf.It was so fun.

One sunny day the pav and Mrs Moala and Mr Moran went outside to play a game and it is called what’s the time Mr wolf it was so fun that we got to play it.So we stand up and lined up in two straight lines it was the boy’s line and the girl’s line.After that we tippy toed to the bottom grass and played there.Mr Moran was the bad wolf and Sivaenah had to say what’s the time Mr wolf and we had to creep quietly he said with his big mouth 3:00 and he looked around to see who was moving and some of us went back like me Maddi Jane Nina Jerry Ozzy and Sione and all these other people and some of us was so close to getting the bad wolf’s back but he turned around and he looked back and saw that person in front of him was moving and it was central so Mr Moran said to her to go to the back because she moved.  So Sivaenah said it again what’s the time Mr Wolf and he said 5:00 and he looked again to see who was moving and it was some other people that was moving so I was so close to getting the bad wolf and then Sivaenah said it again and she said what’s the time Mr Wolf and he said with his strong mouth 7:00 and Jane and Oalii got him and when Oalii and Jane got them Sivaenah said it again and he said dinner time and he eat some of us but not for real’s.