stardome trip

My writing I was doing about the star dome trip that we were blessed to go. It was amazing awesome and cool cause Mrs lai got her baby son and I got to hold he. He is so cute.We got to play on the park when we finish watching a movie on the roof and that was the first time I have watched a movie on the roof.The park was so fun and there was a flying fox and I chew chew chew train and a swing and it was all fun cause of all the parent that come to help us. Thank you to the teacher's that was Miss Moran and Miss king and Miss Davis Miss Eadie and Mr H and Mr Moran my teacher and Miss Moran my girl teacher and thank you to all you guys my team 3 teacher's. This is a thank you to all you guys. This is it a key to growing as a teacher is to keep company mainly with teacher's who uplift you, whose presence inspire you whose dedication drives you, and that is it for all of the teacher's that did this for us, and this is for the parent's that came,and this is it I would like to thank you for making this year a very special one for the student's in my class room and also for me. You have been an invaluable member of our class and your time and talents contribute to providing a successful year of learning for each student,and thank you to all of you guys,and this is for Mr h for being the best teacher,and it goes like this your're the heart of every class room the soul of every school,The mind behind the message,That learning is cool,Your patience and understanding cannot be undersold,Your courage and commitment is that of legends told,each day you teach our children is a day to rejoice because of you our children will have their own voice, So thank you dear teacher for passing knowledge though the years,You thought you were going to be a bad teacher but you are not to me you are so amazing and awesome and  thank you for everything you have did for me Mr h the best teacher I had and thank you for that trip that we went to and thank you for making smile when I am sad or angry so thank you so much Mr H.Love you and we will miss you when you go. Thank you to Mr Moran and Miss Moran for doing everything for me. we all love you and god bless you Mr H and I love you so much and take care of yourself  

Yesterday, all the Year 3s and Year 4s got on a bus to go to the Stardome. Yesterday we went on the bus and got at stardome. When we got there was lots of cars parking.As we were there we got to put our bag in a big cage.Then we went in the stardome and got to look in it and there was lots of objects that were there but it was in glass so there was button's you have to push and it was so amazing. There was a rocket one that if you push it down it will come up.

At the Stardome, we learned some really cool things about our solar system.What we learn was that venus was the hottest planet that is in our solar system.We learn why venus was the hottest planet because at night venus is still hot then mercury but mercury at night it is cold than venus and the gas of venus is hot and that is why venus is the hottest planet in our solar system. The star is hot and the star is the sun.

When we weren’t in the Stardome, we were having fun outside. After we watched the movie on the roof we went outside and played some games and did some activity outside that was tough and playing on the flying fox and the chew chew chew train and on the spinner wheel and the swing on the swing. That is all the activity that we all did.

After all this, we headed back to Point England School. When we finish stardome we come on the bus back and headed back to school and it was still lunch time and we went outside the hall at school and played some hand ball and some of us was so tired because of the trip that we went on. We loved stardome and my favorite part of stardome was watching the movie on the roof and playing outside of stardome and singing songs when we were headed over to stardome.