I am a Year 8 learner at Pt England School in Auckland, New Zealand. I am in Room 3 and my teacher is Mrs Tele'a.
Wednesday, 31 May 2017
Monday, 29 May 2017
What we can hear
I can smell the sandy beach. I can smell the kak cooking from the people. I see the sea splashing under the boat. I see the people making kak. I can see the waka on the beach sailing down.I can hear the boat sailing down the sea.I can hear the seagulls screeching at loud. I can smell the sea water coming to me. I can hear the Chief speaking to his people. I can hear the wind whistling through the waka. I can hear the brown and white dog barking. I can hear the blue waves splashing near the waka.
Describing Me
I am confidence to dance in front of people because my mum when she was little she danced in front of people. I am funny because I make funny faces. I am friendly because when people get hurt or get mocked I help them and say are you alright. I am crazy sometimes because I get a little bit too hyped at home. I am cheerful because when people fall down I cheer for them and say it's okay. I am sometimes silly because I sometimes don’t listen to my brothers and sisters. I am brave because when people bully other people I tell them to walk away and use their wits. I am sometimes excited because when we are going to fun places I get excited. I am the odd one in my family because I am the only child in my family that is confident to dance in front of people. I am special because I am the youngest in my family.
Friday, 26 May 2017
The Taniwha
When I walk up to the long grass I saw a big creature that was looking out for some people. He run and run and try to get them. The people was scared. They run and run. They got to a place. The creature looked like a creature that eat all of the people in the world. The creature has to eyes and has four legs. With his four legs and his too eyes he jump and jump until he got to end. There were all of the people standing we some sticks in there hands. All of the people trowed the sticks to the creature. Then the creature was so so agree that all of the people trowed the sticks to him. Then the creature was running to go and eat all of the people because they all throw the stick to the creature. It was sad one of the person die because the creature eat him up because he had a broken leg.
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Monday, 22 May 2017
The Waka
I can smell the sandy beach. I can smell the kak cooking from the people. I see the sea splashing under the boat. I see the people making kak. I can see the waka on the beach sailing down.I can hear the boat sailing down the sea.I can hear the seagulls screeching at loud. I can smell the sea water coming to me. I can hear the Chief speaking to his people. I can hear the wind whistling through the waka. I can hear the brown and white dog barking. I can hear the blue waves splashing near the waka.
The walkway
Looking out at the clean glistening blue water. I see a walkway. Suddenly I stop. I think to myself. Would this be a good idea before giving myself a chance to answer. I find myself jumping onto the slippery log. I skip from log to log. Splash slipping off the log. I land head first into the ice cold water. With all my strength I swim across the water back to the beach. What an adventure.
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